This is a draft on the top, and on the bottom is the edited one.
My Uncle
skin is a light caramel tanned colour. His eyes look focused like a hawk on where he is going and he wanders around. On his right hand the remaining bits of his pointing finger is swelled up and puffy like a balloon. He has straight black dark chocolate coloured hair and it”s very thin, makes him kind of look like he is in his forties .
He looks much similar to my dad although their not related, but they are both slim like a tall oak tree with no branches. the clothing upon him is clean not straight nor crinkly clothing making him look like and every day civilized citizen. His legs are long and no were near short like a bush. You can find him wearing warm clothing like a jacket or a sweater most of the time. by the time that you see him, he starts walking away down the road. and he does not seem very comfortable in new zealand or around refinery and factories, but still seems pretty calm.
skin is a light caramel tanned colour. His eyes look focused like a hawk on where he is going and he wanders around. On his right hand the remaining bits of his index finger is swelled up like a balloon. He has straight black dark chocolate coloured hair and it”s very thin, makes him kind of look like he is in his forties .
Although their not related, he looks much similar to my dad, but they are both slim like a tall oak tree with no branches. the clothing upon him is clean not straight not crinkly clothing making him look like and every day civilized citizen. His legs are long and no were near short like a bush. Most of the time you can find him wearing warm clothing like a jacket or a sweater. he starts walking away down the road by the time that you see him,. and he does In new zealand or around refinery and factories he does not seem very comfortable, but still acts calm.